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My Love by ~BananagoddessAZ:iconBananagoddessAZ:

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My love,

i realised that i do not tell you how much you mean to me very often, or how you make me feel. i realize that anything could happen and i want you to know how much i care...you mean the world to me. every day i fall in love with you and i love you more with each passing breathe...i know i don't show you my feelings and emotions or let you in my head and i'm sorry. i do not wish to hurt you like this...you're the brightest, most handsome person i have ever met. no one could replace you. i linger on every word even if it seems i do not. i love listening to you explain things even if i do not fully understand them, you show me great things. shivers go through my body each time you hold me, or touch me. i love it when you play with my hair when i lay on your body. you make me feel special and loved...i love the way you look at me with you blue-gray eyes. i love it when your eyebrow moves up when making a funny face. i love the 3 different laughs you have for each funny thing..you make me laugh like no one has ever made me laugh. you say out of this world things that give a cloudy day a meaning...i know i don't show you enough how much i love you but i want you to know i love you with all my heart and soul, you ARE my souldmate, my family, and my lover...even when we fight i get so depressed when i hurt you, i know i do not show that i need you when i'm upset...and that is something i need to work on, but i do...i need you with me forever...i couldn't imagine life without you...you make me a better person and make me want to be a better person still...you're the best thing that has ever happened to me and i treasure each moment, each glance, each touch. you are my true love. even though we are growing older i'm glad i'm growing older with you and i wanted to tell you I Love You.
©2004-2009 ~BananagoddessAZ
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Submitted: August 30, 2004
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this isn't finished yet..i don't think i have said everything i wanted to...but this is it for now...i will update it when i have more structure and thoughts..i know i haven't capitalized things..sorry...just a rush of emotions..i'll edit it as well..

got the idea from reading 's 'Love letter simon'...[link]
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~jerzchick16:iconjerzchick16: Aug 30, 2004, 5:47:48 PM
this is so sweet :hug:

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

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=simmo:iconsimmo: Aug 30, 2004, 9:24:38 PM
Lovely, I love how you took the idea of my works and made it something real and beautiful. I will stop now, as you have a big X on critique :) I could go on forever about how wonderful this prose is...

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"Crime and politics, the situation is always… fluid". - Firefly
~BananagoddessAZ:iconBananagoddessAZ: Aug 30, 2004, 9:45:24 PM
well i didn't want it critiqued cause it's personal...i wrote it for my love..thnx for the fav...o shit..i have to give you credit for the idea!

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=simmo:iconsimmo: Aug 30, 2004, 10:12:32 PM
So I can talk all I want coolies :D
I love that you used my idea, I inspired someone else :D
I love how you wrote about how he made you feel better and how he made you feel. Just make sure youi show him what you wrote :) I bet he will love it :)

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"Crime and politics, the situation is always… fluid". - Firefly
~BananagoddessAZ:iconBananagoddessAZ: Aug 30, 2004, 10:32:55 PM
i did show him and he did love it...thank you...i still have to write more but i couldn't think of anything else but saying i love you over and over..lol...it reminded me of when we wrote notes in school to eachother.haha...we both still have them ALL...god there were thousands of letters....so i got pretty emotional and had to stop...

o i editted it and gave you credit for the idea!! :)

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~jerzchick16:iconjerzchick16: Aug 30, 2004, 10:42:02 PM
welcome :D

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

member of ~Deviant-Underground, *Circleoffriends, ~invisible-inc, *The-Red-Envelope, and =PoetryPlease
=simmo:iconsimmo: Aug 30, 2004, 11:53:02 PM
I know what you mean, you will add to this later, when some of the emotions have settled, and be able to say so much more. I bet those letters would be wonderful things to read when you feel down, and show just how special you are to him :) as he is special to you.
Thanks for the credit, I just love knowing I inspired someone :D

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"Crime and politics, the situation is always… fluid". - Firefly
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